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Need opinion on this poem I wrote for my angel(s) in heaven I love all my Angels 67 kids; Texas 613 posts
Aug 28th '09

Last night I posted this but there was not many people online and I really need advice on this poem I wrote for my my baby. It will be a year ago sept 3 that I had my last miscarriage at 5 months. So I want to send a poem I wrote and I wrote this one last night real fast and I just want to know what people think if I should change or add anything.Please help with this it is very important.My lil one " I think about you everyday and wonder why you could not stay. It hurts me that you had to go how much no-one will ever know. You grew in me your soul so sweet I pray someday that we may meet. But until that day my sweet lil one I will hold you in my heart until my time here is done."

Genius Next Door 17 kids; Edmond, Oklahoma 8773 posts
Aug 28th '09

Its beautiful.
Why are you asking for opinions? Your angel will love it no matter what.

MariaAlexisNJCIII(ASD) 66 kids; Sterling, Illinois 11521 posts
Aug 28th '09
Quoting I love all my Angels:
*Booger Biscuit's Mom* 33 kids; Temecula, California 7301 posts
Aug 28th '09

Its beautiful! I have a poem I wrote on my BG profile page. Want me to put yours in a frame that you can use for BG? I can make it pretty with a nice picture underneath it if you would like. And you can post it on myspace, BG etc.

I love all my Angels 67 kids; Texas 613 posts
Aug 28th '09

I just want it to be nice when I send it off with balloons just shy about even asking because I wrote you but want it to be good thanks for yall liking it.

I love all my Angels 67 kids; Texas 613 posts
Aug 28th '09
Quoting Mrs.Praying for a Miracle:
*Booger Biscuit's Mom* 33 kids; Temecula, California 7301 posts
Aug 28th '09

I'll get right on it! Its a beautiful poem!

I love all my Angels 67 kids; Texas 613 posts
Aug 28th '09
Quoting Mrs.Praying for a Miracle:
*Booger Biscuit's Mom* 33 kids; Temecula, California 7301 posts
Aug 28th '09

Here you go!
It looks better and clearer on photobucket
http://s84.photobucket.com/albums/k37/kaylacm/Pictures%20for%20others/
beautifulpoem.jpg

I love all my Angels 67 kids; Texas 613 posts
Aug 29th '09
Quoting Mrs.Praying for a Miracle:
Mommy to Baby Rock 16 kids; Apollo, Pennsylvania 12 posts
Aug 30th '09

it's absolutely beautiful!!!!